Drew this recently, ik I messed up so please give me tips so that I can get better

Traditional media. Scanned flat, no heavy filters.

Tell me if the proportions are off before I ink further.

(Shared in the spirit of r/drawing — original credit to the artist; remapped onto clan tags for the demo board.)
Artist handle on source: Perfect_Phrase_2440

Critique: edges are a bit soft on the left. Intentional?

This is what the art forum is for. More of this, less random game dumps.

Colour harmony is nice. Might steal the palette for a Discord role icon.