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/teenagers I made a poem for my school

harryyyjack · 7 Sep 2026 at 01:38 · permalink

You were walking towards me,

and now you have switched directions.

I did not sense it at that moment,

but I fell that it happened.

From me to her,

from us to them.

I thought you would remain,

but you never stay

Impulse,

I can't control it.

Impulse,

I can't stop it. from changings

Flora wasn't equal to Peter's force throughout Tyla's time...

Your love had somewhere else to go,

and that wasn't me.

Ok guys im in 10th grade I HAD to make a poem for my function at school (But I suck in it)

PLZ RATE IT

(im 15 , dont be rude)

kizunakip · 7 Sep 2026 at 01:46 · permalink

6 out of 7

harryyyjack · 7 Sep 2026 at 01:49 · permalink

Thank you so much!!
(I HOPE I WIN THIS AWARD)

harryyyjack · 7 Sep 2026 at 01:49 · permalink

wait are you serious??

harryyyjack · 7 Sep 2026 at 01:49 · permalink

67?? 😭 😭 😭

kizunakip · 7 Sep 2026 at 02:00 · permalink

its not visible now but it was okay overall